Well...Its funny.

Well, it was a little short, but I thought it was pretty funny.

Like you says is short. But at last you do a little compilation. I see a lot of people put only on joke in their animation
You animation is very good and your draw are pretty good too but it not perfect. Try to make more emotion in their eyes and make them blink some time. Make them more alive by put some animation in their move. For example when the girl pass over the puddle make her arm move a little bit. One last thing. I find that the girls didn't have voice that fit with her character. Try to make a more girly voice next time.
I know that all that is detail but every detail count.
That animation is beautiful, continue like that and you will to awesome video.

Actually pretty insightful.

Hehehehe. I thought this was amusing. :P I can't think of anything constructive to add except for maybe noting that next time you could go out of your way to find a female voice actor?