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A mini animation of a zombie and a human's love story
well a bit to short for my likeing.. but the color and fairly DECENT animation gets you 2.1/2 stars and the sound efect gets yah another half i suppose.. i dont like being to harsh with these kinds of things, im just trying to tell you to try harder next time and not to give up hope.
good luck on your next animation/game/ect.
I don't think I really need to tell why I dislike this animation. It is simply a constant loop. There is no introduction menu or option for replay. Your title screen is mediocre and off-center. There is practically no story whatsoever, because the central animation involves a man cowardly running from a zombie for a couple of seconds, and then it says "Fin". The outro shows us the zombie feasting upon his flesh. That isn't really anything at all. I understand it is hard to animate Flash games, but you could have put more effort into this than you did. The actual art in the animation is not that bad, although the blurry star background looks kind of weird. My main suggestions for improvement are adding a Play Menu, Replay Button, implementing an actual story, and make it longer than five seconds. Good luck on future works, dude!
i couldn't even give u one star!
Fernando accepts a difficult mission from a suspicious guy who buys him some yoghurt.
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