Good animation.
Great voices (despite being in spanish).
Maybe you should change the subtitle font colour - it is a little hard to see.
All in all,
What a great gift to give your daughter!
Author Comments
ATTENTION - THE ORIGINAL LANGUAGE IS SPANISH, SO IT HAS ENGLISH SUBTITLES.
THANKS SO MUCH FOR WATCHING!!
I wanted to do the bigger gift to my little girl, the best gift that a father can do... Her own animated series! She created the characters, recorded the voices, and with help of my family we could create something pretty and entertaining.
I hope you enjoy it.
DimmuMorti responds:
Thank you very much! I´m so glad for all the critics,
and give me the power for do my best in my next animations. Thank you again!
Very cute and mildly entertaining. With a little more cleaning up this could be very fun. The only other problem that I see with this is who your selling this too. The internet is made up of mostly 10+ year old children that perhaps wouldn't be interested with something like this.
DimmuMorti responds:
It´s really true, the kids of today don´t be interested in things like this one... I only make a gift for my daughter, and I want to share with anyone :) Thanks for the review, I will do my best for the second part!!
This was a pretty cool video. I like the storybook-like art. One big problem is that sometimes the subtitles blend into the background, so I had trouble reading some of it. That could be fixed if the subtitles have a black background under the video. The translation itself could be a little better, but it's not too bad. I hope to see this continue.
DimmuMorti responds:
Thanks you very much! I will repair these mistakes, and try to make the second part better than this one. Thanks again for the helpful comment!
It was VERY touching that you did this for your daughter, and you usually don't see a good flash this long in the under judgement section anymore. But, the graphics weren't that good, and it was in spanish.
DimmuMorti responds:
Oh, great! Thank you very much for you review! It´s true, is one of my first animations, and we´re from Argentina, My daughter doesn´t speak in english very well. The next episode sure will be better!
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3.24 / 5.00
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