Good story overall, but that could have been presented in a better way. Don't forget to let some time for your viewers to read the texts. It took me more than one play to understand everything.
Go on, you're gonna be great!
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This is a random animation I made, hope you like it. I originally uploaded this on my Youtube channel and decided to put it here too. By the way the music is just something I made myself.
From your animation, I can tell your a noob at this. Probably just starting out.
Here are the problems: The animation was pretty bad. It wasn't really more than slight movements, and even those were pretty sketchy and slow. The small amount of a story that existed was confusing, ignorant, and horrible. My body LITERALLY had a bad reaction to it.