good work 5/5
Lots of dark possibilities.
Now that was quite the dark story.
The only downside is that the truth was never revealed in the end.
Your tone and pace were excellent, i can see why this was front-paged. Though you stated that the art style was not what you intend for a final product, i think it really works quite well. Surprisingly, the sound quality (or lack thereof) actually added to the ambiance, making me feel like i was watching an old black and white movie.
Kudos to you, and i really hope this won't be your last piece of work. Looking forward to this series!
great story, love the art.