A beautiful craftsmanship. I sit here speechless. No words.
Author Comments
CONTROLS: WASD
"After one fateful night on Googlechat, ZJ realizes he has to impress the Newgrounds Community by going on the biggest adventure in his life: the Bagel Quest"
This is the prologue to ZJ: Bagel Quest, an epic adventure/platformer starring Newgrounds regular, ZJ. This is merely an introduction, and only a taste of what is to be expected in the upcoming year! To be truthful, this was done in a rush to make it before the new year, so HAPPY NEW YEAR!
lol creepy but funny.
That's The Inside Joke!
Well the music choices were good as well as your contribution to this Jay, kudos on the song. The artwork was very plain, a stick version with ZJ's face plastered on the front, it's like a voodoo doll in a way. The animation was weird, but it did work here. The controls were great and the gameplay was nice, but I wanted more, I mean there was little to no bagels in this. The story is an inside joke and I think it could've been explained a bit better, a nice animator behind you would be able to do this well. As an experimental prologue it works, but in a final project I would like to see more and something neater.
|| Good Points ||
*Good Artwork
*Okay Animation
*Great Sound
*Superb Music
*Good Story
*Great Controls
*Good Gameplay
|| Bad Points ||
*Concept - Good Concept Needs More Though
Jay responds:
Thank you for the review.
I do agree that the concept is lacking. This was finished in a bit of a rush, and it is heavily based on the fact that it is supposed to be an inside joke.
But I think this could be a full project, and maybe if I put some work into it, and maybe get some others to help me out, it could be a decent game.
MMM...BAGELS.
Best game I've ever seen that stars me. Love you Jay!
Jay responds:
No prob, Bagel Master
