Not bad, keep up the good work.
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Greg Phillips is down and out. He lives in a crummy flat above an adult shop, has no job, no family to speak of, no girlfriend, and no friends. Today is his big interview for PLR Ltd.
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Good start but
IMO you have to work on your timing. In comedy timing is everything. But I can see this being really good if you work on that. Too much downtime, pauses, etc...
This is weird, but i like it!
This is very strange, but it keeps making me laugh. Would def like to see more :)
Yawn.
This is extremely boring; I stopped watching after a minute or two. You might want to improve on that.
SquirtyTV responds:
If you didn't watch the entire thing then you have no right to review it...
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