Just a few things
It was not to bad could use some work but if your up at 2 am in the moring not at bad game to play. If you fine tune I would like to see some music and more advanced design but overall still enjoyable.
Author Comments
I have only made a few flash games so far, and this is the first one that I even considered putting on Newgrounds. Please be gentle in your comments, and if you could, it would be really helpful if you could give me some constructive criticism. This is a short game, and really simple. Just try it, and see it for what it is, a simple game, and something to have fun playing.
Too simple
You've certainly got the actual mechanics and whatnot down, but it doesn't stand out. It's a simple ball with a smiley face floating up a castle thing. Try stylizing the menus, the environments, the object/character going up, and maybe add some other things to interact with.
It is what it is
This game does exactly what its supposed to do, and you know what? It works. Do I see myself playing this game hours on end? Not yet. It lacks a certain "umph". If it had something to keep track of high scores, I might be more for playing this game. It is a simple game, but it lacks some features that would make me play this game a lot.