of the guy from courage the cowardly dog who always said naaaaaaughtyyyyyyy. Anyone agree?
I think it could use a shocker at the end. Something like Gregory with a wicked smile and a loud scream.
But that is what everybody expects to happen, the silence is the impact.
fuck you RobinD8!
you tooke the words right out of my mouth and made what i was going to say alot longer XD
naw im kidding anywho (in my own words) great flash!
Very nice creeper feel.
At first it was silly, but once you find out about his family of corpses, it takes on a whole new atmosphere. The effect with the audio panning at the end was a very nice touch to make you jump, but I feel it could have been much more shocking if it were more abrupt, like saving the panning for the last few words, and make it even more unexpected. The voice acting could use some work, although the creepy voice worked very well, there were moments when I didn't feel the voice connecting with the character, and the fact that his mouth never moves adds to that. In scenes when it's obvious he's talking directly to the viewer his mouth should be moving. Other than that, very good work. You got me to jump a little. :D
that was SOO creepy. its not "omg i cant sleep now" creepy. its like.... "wtf!?" creepy.