Kind of cool unti you had human videos
It was pretty a pretty cool cartoon up until you had clips from human videos thrown in there. It broke the continuity of the cartoon.
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A short frame-by-frame of sorts I made, inspired by Ravel's Piano Concerto in G (3rd movement, Bernstein performing). Only 233 frames total, but still took about 6-9 hours in Microsoft Paint.
BenTibbetts responds:
OK, I'll keep that in mind--maybe it was a mistake to introduce live footage.
...Wow?
I loved your timing. The music was a big driving force in this movie. However, the story was a bit strange. Animation was also a "bit simple.
You had a great story at the beginning, but I feel you either got tired or you ran out of time ( with the music) so you had to end it. The ending was a bit simple with the grenades and the baby, but whatev's. It worked, I guess.
I really don't have to much to say, besides keep on with da flash, maybe pull out a coherent storyline, and... Have fun? Yeah, have, fun.
..Maybe have someone draw for you?
BenTibbetts responds:
OK, thanks for the criticisms. I'll work on the drawing. ;)