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This is a short movie I made for the Newgrounds 2011 competition. I don't expect it to win, but I submitted it anyway.

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it was quite good!

this was actually quite entertaining to watch!
you made a very simple animation that was very fun to watch which is very rare on this site so keep it up and you will eventually be the best animator who ever lived!

yeesh.

There really isnt much here except a few lines and tweens to move em. I understand if you are not a good artist. Stick figures are not the problem here. Its lack of trying i think. You wanted to make a cliff but all you drew was a corner... the stick doesn't move once. If you are not good at drawing something, look to google for some help. There are plenty of drawing sites to help you improve. Let alone just google a picture of a cliff and take notes of the details it have. Try harder next time. Don't put it up if your not going to even put effort into your work. Also don't complain about getting 4's from peoples reviews.

DrunkenMonkey123 responds:

I'm not complaining, I'm just making a point. I'm just a beginner with flash, so don't expect a masterpiece from me.

just saying...

Hey, keep up the work.
to me, and to a lot of people on this site, i think a 4 ranking is avg, so don't even worry about people saying its okay, and then giving you a four. That's just part of some peoples mental scoring system.

The constructive criticism has already been spoken by the other people that have reviewed it.

MelanizingChameleon gave you 6 things that you could work on, and personally i agree with all six.

DrunkenMonkey123 responds:

I agree with almost all your points... but the first constructive criticism I got was from yunhut. The other ones just said it was crap - they didn't specify why.

Pretty bad

Its pretty bad man, let me tell you why:
1. It lacked any sort of coherent plot
2. The animation was absent, other than him zipping across the screen
3. The music overlaps when you replay the flash
4. Too short
5. Play and Replay buttons were identical
6. No Background

This really doesn't need to be on Newgrounds. Next time you make a flash, try to watch it after you've made it, and see if you enjoyed watching it other than for the fact that you made it. If you DON'T want to watch it, what makes you think other people would?

DrunkenMonkey123 responds:

Hey, if people didn't want this to be on newgrounds, they would have blammed it. It's not been blammed. I agree with your six points, though.

Well . .

It's not horrible . . You just need to work a little on your animation and add some background too . .

DrunkenMonkey123 responds:

Finally, some constructive criticism! I completely agree with you. I do need to work on it. But if it's not horrible, why the 4?

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3,354
Votes
9
Score
1.34 / 5.00

Uploaded
Sep 24, 2011
4:12 AM EDT
Genre
Drama