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30 hours of work for 3 second loop (animated illustration? .-.), but looks pretty good :)
Guys, tell me, if you like it or not, or what to improve.

Maybe I'll use her for something longer...or just in demo reel...

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Her leg...

Nice and smooth animation.
Everything looks great... besides that if you watch her legs you will see that one of them will disappear... I mean... it will get... chopped of and half :(


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Gekon responds:

lol ,damn, seems 24 fps and blurs doesn't solve everything :P


I have added you to my favourites

This is a very well-animated piece of animation. I can imagine that you put an inordinate amount of time into the details, including motion blur. I personally think that the motion blur is a stylistic choice, that is only marred by the desire for people to look at her tight figure :P But anyway, enough of being a pervert.

I know that you don't want to make a full-length movie, but it would be kick-ass if you did. You said "making 8751486792659735 episode of 'Random Action/Carnage Movies'? No, thank you ;)", but I think that's quite a pessimistic view of things. Animation is a craft, and usually the long ones with the sound, and storyline take a fair amount of dedication, blood, sweat and tears to complete. I admire those that make long, sprawling epics, and I admire this form of art as well.

Just remember that you are very talented, and if you made a longer submission, you don't need to go into infintesimal details, because that would take forever, but if you made a 3-minute short with a few sketches, it would still be pretty pwnage. Just make it however you want, it doesn't have to be a clone of whatever submissions have passed. It's just it'd be pwnage if you did decide to do a full-length animation, even if it weren't about fighting purely.

Benjamin


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Gekon responds:

I've got nothing against long movies, I could make 5 minutes of as simple and influent as possible story during these 30 hours but it wouldn't look as good as these 3 seconds ;)


That knife.

That knife looks flexible.
BTW, her mask should be tighter.The random black lines on the mask make it ugly.


Gekon responds:

rock solid knife breaks on the first rib :C


Very fluid

Very nice work. Only complaint (other reviewers have also already mentioned it): Motion blur.
DON'T make a gif out of it or any other attempt of putting this into a movie or so. It is beautiful as it is right now so let it stand alone and shine. I would certainly like to see more such shorts here.


Gekon responds:

yeah, I think I'm getting used to this kind of 'motion illustration', you can show off, and don;t need story, sound effects and all this shit ;)


nice

I'd say at some victims to it and try writing a little storyline about why she'd be fighting them,


Gekon responds:

you mean making 8751486792659735 episode of 'Random Action/Carnage Movies'?
No, thank you ;)

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Aug 13, 2011
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