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Walter is left alone, finds the happiness...
ATTENTION: The story of this game was invented, is not based on a true story!

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This game could've been better if there were more to the game itself. Perhaps some choices (like Walter doesn't kill himself, for example) could make the game more fleshed out. The gameplay only involved holding down the right arrow, and nothing more, which isn't necessarily bad. You can make a good visual novel with only simplistic game controls. But, this kind of story has been done time and time again. Also, the grammar in this was bad enough in my opinion that it ruined the atmosphere for me.

That said, I do think you can make a better game from this if you spent more time on it.

Okay, this is a kind of poor attempt at having a profound story. Like, it feels like "what's the point?" This is like if a highschooler tried to write an emotional story, it lacks meaning and depth and pretends to be more than it is. The story of this game is a man is sad because his lover died and then he kills himself. There's no weight to it and since it isn't trying to tell us anything it's sort of just a waste of time. It probably could have been stretched out for longer and gone more into the character but as it is I felt nothing from this game. The art, though inconsistent, is alright and the writing is hilariously bad.

this is so sad can we get 50 likes

So sad ;-;

I'm not really sure what I just watched, or played. The text could be a lot better, even a small little box at the bottom with dialog, with a small avatar of the person talking, instead of floating text. The story, bland, it's one that has been told more times that I have been to the toilet in my lifetime, it's generic, unoriginal, and no new twist was put on it here.

Controls were simple, but pointless, you didn't even need to include the left arrow key, just have the right arrow key! I mean, there was so much you could have done here, but didn't, you could have had more controls, you could have told us more about the person who died, you could have told us more about the person we were playing as. I did not care about any of the characters, I don't know who they are, I was not invested in them.

There is a lot of room for improvement on this one, it's very barebones.

1/5

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Aug 3, 2011
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