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Walter is left alone, finds the happiness...
ATTENTION: The story of this game was invented, is not based on a true story!

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The message of the game:
If anything happens, kill yourself! :)

This game could've been better if there were more to the game itself. Perhaps some choices (like Walter doesn't kill himself, for example) could make the game more fleshed out. The gameplay only involved holding down the right arrow, and nothing more, which isn't necessarily bad. You can make a good visual novel with only simplistic game controls. But, this kind of story has been done time and time again. Also, the grammar in this was bad enough in my opinion that it ruined the atmosphere for me.

That said, I do think you can make a better game from this if you spent more time on it.

Okay, this is a kind of poor attempt at having a profound story. Like, it feels like "what's the point?" This is like if a highschooler tried to write an emotional story, it lacks meaning and depth and pretends to be more than it is. The story of this game is a man is sad because his lover died and then he kills himself. There's no weight to it and since it isn't trying to tell us anything it's sort of just a waste of time. It probably could have been stretched out for longer and gone more into the character but as it is I felt nothing from this game. The art, though inconsistent, is alright and the writing is hilariously bad.

this is so sad can we get 50 likes

So sad ;-;

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Score
2.91 / 5.00

Uploaded
Aug 3, 2011
5:25 AM EDT
Genre
Adventure - Other
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