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Ok, Heres some CC
Honestely, it wasn't good. The concept has potential, but it doesnt seem like you put all the time and effort into this you could have. Most people spend months on there flash submissions, were you didn't even spend a day on it. If you can produce a good short gag with good art in lets say, a few hours? then great! But if itn not high quality you have to spend more time on it.
You lacked a lot of actual animation in this. It seemed to be just flashes of images. Newgrounds has a LOT of good animation and charachter design tutorials.
The Next thing would be your artwork. I felt that you just quickly scribbled these characters without putting much thought into lighting and shading, mood, posture, and so on. Spend at least an hour really thinking about your character and doing character maps. You need to know what you character looks like, what you charachetr smells like, tastes like, how he thinks, and what kind of mood he will be in by heart. Believe me, people LOVE a character with a lot of personality.
Since this is only your second flash, i will give you a 5/10 and a 2/5. Btw dont let your submissions being blammed get to you. It happens all the time here on newgrounds.
good but the replay thing is hard to hit and music cuts off
I'm supporting this, but...
Add sound effects. And don't just loop the same music, that REALLY irritates me. Otherwise, keep up the good work, try to make a consistent flash (e.g a flash that's in constant motion) next time and try to make it a little longer.
Not the greatest...
But not blam worthy either, mildly funny, original, and has zombies. music is interesting. perhaps add a puking noise when he throws up.