AWESOME!

You did a good job. It's really decent.

Good game

The controls were simple, and the music choice didn't bother me. Gameplay was good, and I have no problem with it at all. You missed out on a 10/10 because of the time limit thing. I think for games like this, a time limit is not really needed, and takes a bit of the fun out of the games, but I'm sure you had your reasons for putting a time limit in.

Overall, great game. :)

It's... okay...

While I like the general idea of the game, I feel as though the control scheme could have been a bit more thought out for the type of open-world environment the notebook created. Either that, or maybe the environment should have been changed altogether. Perhaps the game could have taken place in an infant's drawing or something, or maybe a better aiming mechanic could have been implemented to give this game the little push it would have needed to be a great game.

Also, as much as I appreciate your choice in music, I feel like it was generic and poorly thought out. It doesn't really set the mood for the game at all, seeing as how it's techno and the villan looks medieval. I don't think the music is bad, I just think that you could have put a bit more thought into it.

The last problem I have with this game is the generic animation. It looks a bit too generic, and it makes the player feel removed. The menu is the polar opposite: it's too smooth, so you have a very conflicting game feel.

I know I sound like a dick, especially because I haven't uploaded anything of my own, but try to keep those points in mind when you create games in the future. Little things like that are really noticeable on the client end.

its a game

but not a great game.

Good!

well yeah im agree with sebi99cl with the music, but it's not THAT BAD, did you aimed the mouse badly or something like that? the game deserves more than a simple 3... well the controls are not weird, theyre just simple, but that way its fun, anyways, i know its just paper but you can improve your art a little, but sticks are a way to draw, a style, so i think you made it well, about the music, it just needs a theme that fits right into the game, i dont need to hear the black eyed peas while im playing a fantasy rpg for example, if i rate the song, well yeah it needs some improve, but we are rating the GAME, so for me its okay, the game loop gives you concentration, and hearing it eliminates that weird silence at background, for me, it's well done