But I'm starting to sense a little Scientology in this.
only one thing is starting to bug me
it seems to me that you are using the phrase "Christ Conscience" a bit too much and it is starting to annoy me. If you know any other alternative ways to say it , well feel free to use those alternatives.
Nope, gotta use Christ. It will make sense by the end ;)
Funny, but still pseudosicence
It was getting a bit boring, but it was still funny, but yeah, I have to agree with the majority, it is total pseudoscience!
One thing right
"This has never happened in the universe, ever."
Isn't the blue-ish glow around the Earth called "The Atmosphere"? O_o
Bitta both in there i think ;)