Not that bad...
This is not that bad.. Actually i kinda like it :) Keep making animations, bro :)
Author Comments
This is actually my first attempt at flash animation. As you can see, the framerate is really, really slow; even if it does compliment the drawings. Unfortunatly, to fix would involve alot of erasing and redrawing, and I just don't have the time for it.
But I did put some work into this, so I want to show something of the effort.
pretty good for a first...
Dont worry about raw, hes just a troll.
thats pretty good for yor first try
cool
for ur first its prety good just keep practicing
Sorry
but why would we want to watch this?
Although I can see effort went into it, I don't find it at all entertaining/interesting. I can't understand what is going on.
As you learn Flash you will create a lot of experiments that might get a smile from your friends, but don't get a bad rep by submitting them all here.
Use colour, sound and backgrounds, the return. Your art/animation ability is all there waiting to be used for something complete and meaningful. See you when you are ready.
too long for little content
The way he puts the glove on looks great. You have potential. The scenes with walking feel too long and you probably just don't need that many frames for that.
Overall, the frame rate is a little slow, and the flash moves along in a choppy way.
Needless to say it's a little bare--black on white, not the most accurate drawing. Detail is good though. I still like your style but I hope to see you clean it up in future animations.