I like it

so this was actually not halfbad for what it is, I like the story just wish it was more multple pathways but still pretty fun, You have a nice concept here just wish there was even more but anyways nice game here I liked it

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this isnt that bad at all

well it have nothing exept not so good story...

If I had to wrap this up in three or less words, it would have been "COOL STORY BRO".

Speaking of, the story is the only thing that is actually okay. The rest of the presentation is pretty pointless/garbagey.

1- There's few to no point in choices other than progressing the story or getting a quickly-revertable game over. As in, the game keeps forcing a path to the player. This is a "suicidal mechanic" on interactive fiction and visual novels. True, it has 2 types of ending (other than game overs), but also true that they are 2 clicks apart from each other - literally.

2- Font and colors (which comprise about 97% of the game) are poorly chosen. Instructions/credits have RED text over RED background. Are you serious?

3- Images (the other 3%, or so) are quite irrelevant. Not bad though. WIsh they could have an actual role other than pointless decoration. They also seem to be poorly cropped/resized. Ideally, every screen should have his own background image, to give a better ambiance and serve the small purpose of locating the player into the story.

(in short: The red background sux)

4- No sound or music whatsoever. better than trash soundwaves, which, I think, would have been picked by you (given the rest of the game).

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So, 1 star for the story/plot. Nothing else. This was a great disappointment

Good one