Not Bad...
You should remake this game and improve a lot.
Author Comments
hey guys this is my first ever game on flash, this game was created in about 2-3 weeks for my game design course so do expect it to be kinda crap.
anyways its basically a game about a pink bunny that wants his carrots,
be warned as this is only a promo, meaning there is only one level and you may expirance glitches and other bugs
the controls are in the game but they r similar to most games
arrow keys to move, space to jump.
also please comment on any tips and hints that u might give me on making my game better
1 last thing, if the game goes well and i get a decent grade i might dedicate my time to completing this game.
nytrex responds:
i probably will and thnx for the comment
Need More Work
maybe you must increase the quality of the picture.. i think many people didn't like it..
nytrex responds:
WHAT????
A good start
It's looking good but you should add a standing animation instead of having the bunny walking in place. Also, when you win, you go back to the newgrounds logo, that needs to be fixed.
If you plan to go further with this game. try adding more levels, enemies and add some powerups so you're not just going around collecting carrots.
Hmm...
I must say there are a lot of mistakes here.
I understand this is 2-week college work and I understand the glitches you spoke of in your comment.
Pros:
-Cute Concept
Cons: (even though this is a promo, I must say)
-Grammatical errors ("favurite")
-No indication of winning (Where is the Win screen?)
-Character animation is pretty stiff (Nitpicking?)
But well done man! Hopefully you take this criticism in and carry on improving in the future...