This was actually pretty nice. The only real problem I encountered here is I am not used to reading real fancy cursive like that. I understood most of it but wow it took me a bit to read some of the images. Maybe next time you could possibly make it a little less fancy looking for users who can not always read cursive. I used to be able to do real fancy hand writing and I still do sometimes but I rarely do that anymore.
The art here was spectacular and I liked how it was simply shades of pink only. Kind of puts emphasis on the title since you would want to see soft and nice things if the title were like that right? The song you put with this was mostly fitting for the storyline at play here so that was good I think.
Overall, nice artwork, fancy handwriting. Could maybe auto make it to where it goes to the next frame after a few seconds so users can read it and then go to the next frame, would be good I think.
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I've thought about adding an auto-play feature, the problem is the time it would take to do, and the size of the finished product.
I'm not sure i should change the font either, because I feel people will probably get used to the writing as the story progresses.
Thanks for the review though!