Good
Funny, I lol'd at the end.
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I found this while browsing through old archives in my computer. I submitted it for the Metal Gear Collab back in 2008. It didn't get in. Thirty seconds of 'El Gear de Metal'.
jucama responds:
good ! thank you for your comment
How did this not get in?
You sir, are funny. The art and animation leave a bit to be desired; I'd try to tweak that on future submissions. Though this is two years old, so your skills in those areas may already have improved. The joke was told perfectly. I didn't see it coming, it perfectly contrasted the "macho" subjet matter. I was completely caught off guard and this flash made me laugh out loud. And I am recovering from bronchitis, so that caused me pain. I'll be sending you the medical bill.
You know how to tell a joke. I appreciate that. Kudos and good job.
jucama responds:
Glad you liked it. Not paying that bill though, talk to my lawyer
Fantastic!
The only thing you have to work on is those white lines at the top and bottom of the screen. Other than that, you have an awesome animation. The ending was just a riot! And the voice acting wasn't too shabby either! Great work!
jucama responds:
yeah, too late I realised I provided the wrong height for the movie... thank you very much for the comment