Pretty cool :P but a few problems to look out for
i think i liked it better when it was more of a webcomic, you (or whoever did the voice acting) wasnt too bad, but at the very least you should buy a better microphone. and same as the person below me, the old spice thing wasnt all that great XD i couldnt help but laugh a little though (mostly because i wasnt expecting it XD) it was pretty entertaining, and i did like the video. keep it up :D
Ahh, yes the good old days of the webcomic, I think I perfered it too, seeing that making Episodes would be much easier to make and I could probably insert more jokes with text than what I can do with voice acting. The Old Spice thing was kind of bad, and as much as I didn't want to put that in the actual episode, I couldn't help but chuckle because of how inaccurate it was to the actual thing, which in my opinion is what made that funny, you know like, FAIL! XD. I'll have to debate with myself if I should go back to the webcomic style or not. :/
Terrible reference to Old Spice commercial
Overall the video could've been more funny. I wasn't totally bored when I watched it, but when the Old Spice commercial reference came, that just ruined it. That is a great commercial, and if you're gonna use that line, u have to make it pretty damn funny.
the refereence was crappy intentionally, added it to kinda show you how lame he was, which in made it slightly funny in a fail way. btw the series isn't totally meant to be funny. Although it's in the "Comedy-Original" section, theres no better genre to put it in