A file I found in the back of my hard drive. I would add sound, but alas, I have none.
well...
I liked it... but i found some issues...
My number one... sound PLEASE!!! Imagine jaws without the theme music. That killed the pokemon shout out for me.
The wall... what was that? i understand that mr. giggles is all powerful, but still.
Slower TEXT cant... read... it...
Sorry, I can't add music. I don't have a license to use any. The Pie says: "Wait... You have to use Stockpile before you can use Swallow. Thank You also for writing helpful feedback instead of just saying it's crap.
Take your time
I fear that this animation was produced with the idea of fulfilling the entire story rather than producing a good quality flash.
Take your time, you could have easily turned it into two or three 30 second episodes of well drawn, well sounding and well produced animation.
It baffles me as to why at the end you would use text and straight lines when the style of the rest of the film is hand drawn and sketchy.
I say try again. If this flash survives the Blam, then attempt to remake it, or a sequel with some TLC, with sound, fluid action and some slower dialogue!
Keep working hard, you definitely have a style that could make a good short animation.
Thank you for giving useful feedback. It did actually take me about 2 weeks to make this, but you're right. I'm better with paper than a computer tablet.
frames too fast (not to mention the rest)
i guess you should had left the file in the back of your hard drive... hehe
Your joke was creative to say the least!
Needs work
I suggest slowing down the story so text is easier to read. and add in music
I don't actually have music.