Hmm
Made me laugh, you've got a good sense of humour
Keep making animations dude and I'll keep watching.
Some small criticisms however, I didn't like the voice acting really, didn't seem diverse enough or like natural voices, they sounded a little forced into the role and didn't convey the feelings well enough to make the comedic aspect stand out.
The animation was fine, I enjoy this sort of animation style, it's a little sloppy, but I couldn't do anywhere near as skilled animation so who am I to judge :D.
Praise to the NG twitter, saw your tweet and decided to watch this, glad I did.