Its not bad

But the part where he starts to freak out for a moment was kinda.....random and dumb, take it out and i'd like it more

Awesome!

I...didn't get bored with it....

wow

i got bored as well

I Got Bored Watching It

It's perfectly okay not to finish something if you're too bored with it to make it interesting.

step 3: make sure your friend is jelous

Awesome story, like it :)

especialy how he bullies the guy to be jelous :D

-5/5
-7/10 (graphics could be beter)