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02-10-11 – 10-23-17

Author Comments

2 fighthers killed all the girls and now their facing the trouble they had for the rest of their lives.

Reviews


potatopowerpotatopower

Rated 5 / 5 stars

I stopped watching it at the

I stopped watching when I saw space marines from Warhammer 40k, just to watch the animation of them :3


RuleBreakersRuleBreakers

Rated 0 / 5 stars

Did you draw something

Did you draw something? all i saw was sprites and pictures ¬¬ come on! you can do something better


DiroNomerDiroNomer

Rated 1 / 5 stars

Ehh...

You got a long way to go brother...


thefilmakerthefilmaker

Rated 5 / 5 stars

i just want some bad guys

i wish girls like me


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Rated 5 / 5 stars

it sucks.

ill give u a ten for nice.


puppetfunnypuppetfunny

Rated 5 / 5 stars

It's okay tho

I know you tried your best on it, but i'm givin you a ten for that girl picture before the pokemon battle.I ink youshould work on it a little, and you miiiiiiiiigeta better score.


donuts1donuts1

Rated 5 / 5 stars

wow...

You you work on this? i think you didn't. If yout teaching us a lesson, its fine. Keep your work up, you got ways to go.


Thomas12333Thomas12333

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Hello. Okay work.

This is okay, but i think you can do better. The girl pictures are soo cool, but man.


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Rated 5 / 5 stars

A good lesson. Ill give you a ten.

Okay. First, these two people got in school, and then they killed all the girls. Don't make mistakes like that. Author: I think you need to put more effect in there buddy.


FusterCluckFusterCluck

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars

I left an imprint of my palm on my face.

Try harder.

First, please, don't voice act without a script, or some rehearsal first. Voice quality is awful. Second, try actually animating instead of putting images on some pictures and then moving them around. Third, learn some humor. I got so bored watching this I could have fallen asleep. Lastly, stop word calling and actually voice-act.


DaaleDaale

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars

Okay...

That was pretty damn terrible.


Darkangel2311Darkangel2311

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars

I've seen worse....Buuuuuuuuut....

Yea...that was pretty bad though. I have no idea what they are saying. But on the other hand. I give you props for having the balls to upload this.


superkid7777777superkid7777777

Rated 5 / 5 stars

i learned my lesson.

I can honestly say that I will never ruin every girl's valentine's day. Especially if im a gay-man. I think the text passages were very enlightening and if i even had a small chance of trying to ruin valentines day, I know the consequence of the worst month ver far outweighs the benefits. thank you, qazwsxedcr. I hope you continue to make lessons for us, the world, and your students. I would give this more than 10 if I could.


donuthead7310donuthead7310

Rated 3 / 5 stars

wat

i have to admit, i lol'd


ThePlainTacoThePlainTaco

Rated 0 / 5 stars

This is a horrible flash.

I have no clue on what the hell happened. This doesn't make sense at all, no offense.


ErichoEricho

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Entertaining and bad

I could simply not say I hated this, because it was quite fun to watch! All of the characters just looked so stupid walking around and kicking. I mean, it is kind of an interesting and original idea to have the animation like that. I just feel as though it could be a lot flashier, if it was intended to be something taken seriously. I love the cheesy CGI effects and how you really have no idea what is going to happen next. It is hard to tell when it is even over.

I think the two characters are supposed to go to jail at the end or something. I especially like the guy in the purple clothes and how silly he looks kicking forever. I guess you are trying to teach a lesson. The music is also really silly and fun to listen to. Congradulations on doing a good representation of what spam should be.


IncendiaryProductionIncendiaryProduction

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Impressive

I like this, very artistic.

To everyone else who didn't get it:

It is an abstract interpretation of the author's feelings and emotions about the situation in Egypt and how it relates to the turmoil in America's educational system.

Bravo, sir. Bravo.


OMGguy4OMGguy4

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars

this is redonkulous

the only semi-good part was the hearts in the beginning


angelicodinangelicodin

Rated 1 / 5 stars

Many things wrong, still reviewwed none the less

There are many things wrong here but I will first start with a couple good.

You did show that you can import movie clips and sprites to some extent into your flash and you seem to have a good start onto learning flash.

Now onto things I didn't like, but I'll add some helpful suggestions.

I'd like to start with the imported sprites of game characters. Though you did import them you still forgot to actually alpha mask them to five them a full transparency for them. While this can work for some styles of movies it totally clashes with everything you have here.

Next would be the spelling. It is important when using any kind of text that you spell correctly. Unless you intentionally miss spelling for effect, in witch case then you should add much more mistakes so people don't get the wrong idea from your movie.

Others have commented on the audio quality and I have to agree with them. With so many tools at your touch there is not much that has not been already. Better audio next time. Music and audio really helps movies of any kind. Example, watch your favorite movie of all time, but mute the sound and turn on subtitles. It just dose not have the same feel as if you where watching it. Music drives a feeling and story.

At the part where you are doing a play on Pokemon©, this was a good idea, but try to keep it in the style that it was intended for. This one little clip is a clash between both the running style of the rest of the movie as well as even the game concept of Pokemon©. Doing a plan on a game or other pop culture is a great way to make a point, but try to be consistent with it as you will get a lot more of what we call the 'WOW' factor.

Last thing was the ending. Used the same sprites from though out the movie, witch already used too much, could be fine here, but the real problem I had as well as many others, is that is just loops back to the start of the movie. Having a replay or return to start button dose wonders and is simple flash frame control. The other thing about the ending is there is no copy right information about the sources you used or even credit to your self. If you do some work of any kind, at least put your name on it. It's like if the Mona Lisa was done by an unknown artist. Even if you think and others think it's not worth it. Trust me, it's always worth it.

That concludes my review. Hope to see you next project and your advancement in flash.


shadowsnhdshadowsnhd

Rated 2 / 5 stars

Lol

This actually made me laugh. It was really cheesy...... I didn't even know what was going on.


PoundDotBlamPoundDotBlam

Rated 0 / 5 stars

Wow...

This is mind boggling...


GasthecarGasthecar

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Bloody fantastic

Animations blended together seamlessly, I was completely immersed in the story

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