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First episode of the saga. Animated crappily and short running time.

Well, hope it survives :)

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Good

Well you obviously have some potential with the series. I like the black background and white lines style (mainly because that's what I did for my first flash). So, please, make more.

It's alright

It looks like you have an idea but you just weren't able to express it the way you wanted to. A bit of color would have helped I think.

I did like how your first flash, 1 Hour Flash, was done but I don't think that style works for this video.

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hmmmm...

I didn't get it, sorry but.. I really didn't get it, what is it about?

Krywk responds:

Pure randomness. A guy walks and a game falls from nowhere. He picks it up and puts it in his xbox. It's a lame shooter.

More detail, but a good start

Not bad, try adding more detail to your characters. Also, add voice acting so that you can add depth to your movies.

Krywk responds:

Thanks :D