My advice?
Continue this. Literally create more chase and fight bits and weave yourself a story out of them dont make it just bland talking but leave it techno.
Author Comments
This is an animation I made for a film festival at my school. Its not the best in the world but Id say its good enough to post. Any creative criticism is welcome. Hopefully I can make a series out of this short animation but we'll see.
I had to use a techno guiles theme as the music because i ran out of time. it was the only thing I could think of that goes with everything. the remix is by Rayza.
Also If any of you know a good program for recording dialogue or creating music like techno I would very much appreciate it if you'd let me know.
FULL OF WIN
I preferred the art style of the main character in the second half, where she was rendered without lips, but that didn't serve to damage my impression AT ALL.
This was EXTREMELY epic, you're an excellent animator.
Only bug is that the music keeps going once the animation loops back to the title screen; use your stop-alls!
cool
but your only halfway finished with it, waiting to see the other half :)
Two words.
Awesomely-terrific-super-mega-ultra-h ulknificently epic
pretty good
not to bad liked the music and animation just was a little short