Next time you submit a demo...

You want to make sure it is a demo. This really is more of an artwork piece. That being said, I think you have a good beginning scene to a point and click game. I don't know if you have ever made a game, but prepare your self to invest a lot of time. Some times your best critics are your hardest. Take what the other posters have said and try to improve on it. I personally think it's a pretty good picture. Good luck and I hope to see a future game come out of this.

(7/10 for the picture)

three things

firstly: demos suck
second: you are not supposed to put demos on newgrounds PERIOD
third: why would you sumbit a demo ANYWHERE that's only two clicks and ur done? i mean really? u click the computer twice and a hand comes out, you can't even begin to understand what the finished game will be like (which is the whole idea behind submitting demos) I'm not sure what you hoped to accomplish here, but i hope this particular flash was a mistake altogether

why....just why....

why would you submit something where the thing isnt even close to complete i click something a hand comes out and thats it, its terrible demo so please when you go to submit something else make sure its more complete than this piece of crap. Epic fail awesome job.