It was pretty good. Could have had more story/depth, maybe a bit longer. I really liked it all around, though it would be cool to see what happens to John and Rob after they escape. Also, maybe more songs? Ok, thanks for reading, and enjoy the game!
Author Comments
Follow John Cotton as tries to escape from the prison he was wrongly sent to. (First Person, sometimes shooter.)
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this a 1 out of a 100 chance of being found good
This needs to be more explanetory it doesent make any sence
Zorbia responds:
Maybe if you read the text at the beginning you might have actually understood, or can you not read?
Ehhh
Everything was rather drawn out to the point that I quickly lost intrest.
If you could pick up the pace, maybe but not having the super slow text crawl for everything, or by putting in a context clue for "look at/examine" instead of fully explaining what the person has to do.
If you get anthing out of my review it's this; work on your pacing of the game.
Zorbia responds:
Ok, I kind of see what you are getting at. I thought the pacing was fine and so did my peers/testers, but you know. You can't appeal to everyone can you? :/
Huh, needs some improvement, could work nicely.
First of all, the pistol should be silenced and have a limited ammo clip, which would add a deeper immersion and challenge to the game.
Also right/wrong ways to do things in the game should also be added
(Like if you firstly shot the lights down in the first puzzle, a guard would sound the alarm and it would be game over. So you'd have to shoot the Switch instead for a more sneaky approach)
You should also find Voice Actors for your characters instead of plain subtitles, there are plenty VAs on newgrounds looking forward to show their voice.
Just giving out friendly advice, this could be a great game with polish and a little bit more effort. Keep up!
Zorbia responds:
Thanks! This gave me loads to think about. I don't think I will change this game really, but if I ever make a sequel or another game, I will definitely do all of this. Thanks for being fair as well, unlike some of the other reviews. :)
