if you only

if you'd only added the original "balls to you" Quote
i was kinda waiting for it so that dissapointed me.
(i could use my imagination)
although actually trhowing a ball to the guy was original :D

Not bad.

I like the art style, and I won't criticise the writing too much seeing as it's your first attempt.
It's a good first crack, I'd like to see you do more work in this style. Nice one.

Not bad for a first animation

You could have though made it a bit longer, for now it's very short and the purpose of the flash doesn't really come forward!