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magikarp vs pong(demo)

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this is both my first game and the demo(not complete) version. it will be improved upon later
please give suggestions and advice in comments
made with game factory 2

sarge, a commander in the great magikarp army is at war with his greatest enemy(a wall)
use your paddle and ball to defeat it

I highly reccomend looking at the tutorial first(it tells the goal of the game

looking for music for final version, pm me if interested

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you need to get rid of the up and down angle and turn up the randomness of the ball's bounce MAGIKARP ARMY RULES

pretty bad

honestly, it's pretty awful
the ball bounces forward, no matter what part of the magikarp it hits, even if it's past the paddle
the walls really screw you up
often times my mouse exited the small screen because you can't tell where it is (horizontally, anyways)
and not to mention the ball getting stuck...


advice (per your request):
-Sounds for when the ball hits your paddle and the wall
-background music

-Don't know how I did it, but I somehow got the ball stuck just going up and down between the top and bottom of the screen.
-There are some invisible walls in places (not consistent). I would hit the ball and it would bounce back to me before hitting the far wall, sometimes almost instantly.

tahm10 responds:

i will try to fix those problems

its just a rehash of what you learned

from the toutoral.
If you want to learn more about game factory 2 my sugjestion is try to make a side scrolling shooter I have learned so much doing that when I first started out.

although I dont perticulary like the game here are some suggestions to make it better.

make backgrounds they add atmousoher to a game.
add some sound like a ping sound when the ball hits stuff.

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2.25 / 5.00

Jan 12, 2011
1:11 PM EST