Not bad.
I don't think this is the kind of thing people really like to see though. You'd have to go for a more "action-y" approach.
Author Comments
And now for something experimental... This series is based more on storytelling so if you're super A.D.D. or don't enjoy reading this may not be for you.
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This is The Legend of Dirk. You are Dirk. Today is a very special day for you. Today...you are born.
DailyAdventure responds:
It'll get more actiony
'ADD'
Haha, I dó have ADD so this was indeed a challenge for my attention span.
And the attention span lost, to be truthful. :(
I love stories, but this one had too much repetition in it and not enough story-progressing. It was a bit too boring.
I give you extra points for the accent though. ;)
Btw, what did you use to make the graphics?
Started out neat.
Disappointed when I noticed it was just pictures of WoW.
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