great animation but...
Was that Mastermind?? :)
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If the video lags there is a Youtube version here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kT2cAyGgO_o
Story by Jesse Dale
Animation by Dylan Meville (me)
Voice talent by Shawn Chiplock and Edwyn Tiong, among others.
N.I.N.J.A., an organization created to silence the noisy ones? or something more...
This is pieces of the animation I worked on for about 4 months while going to school, complied into a short little trailer. Production on this has been stopped due to many reasons, but depending on the feedback...well who knows? :)
I had fun making this, and it's some of my best animation to date, so I hope you enjoy it :D
PS. I hope it's not too dark, I kinda make things too dark sometimes... :( Looks cool on my screen anyways... :p
PPS. There are a ton of filters. It may (but shouldn't) lag. Try right-clicking and toggling the quality to low or something. IDK if that will help though.
Great stuff! BUT...
Your usage needs tweaking... there are certain parts that will horrify the grammar nazis.
The Path of his Father...
It would have been better had you had the man commissioning Collin say,
... if he follows the same path AS his father, or if he continues down the same path as his father, or if he takes the same path as his father... do you understand?
Do This Mission... in that particular conversation, an operative in control of another operative might be far more likely to use better English and say this:
Connor will carry out this mission, Collin is to carry out this mission... etc.
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I would be happy to um, what is the word? -Beta- your next script, if you like...
Never done a script before! Might be fun! I write too much Doctor Who fanfiction anyway... WELL there can never be too much of THAT, but still...
Other than those types of things, this was great! Nothing else wrong with it that I could see. I don't do Flash, yet, but hey. This was great.
Marsume responds:
Yeah, I never really noticed that before, but the script/story wasn't written by me. I was just given some voices and the outline of what the storywriter wanted the scene to look/feel like.
Thanks though :)
Looks pretty sweet indeed
However, I too, had issues with the filters. High quality, standard size, it ran "meh" during the red scenes. I have a fairly nice CPU and gfx card running this thing, so I feel a lot of people are going to have much more serious issues. Might be something to consider.
If that is resolved, I would love to see more of this.
Marsume responds:
Hmm, that's quite unfortunate. Every machine I've tested this on has ran fine, but I'll keep it in mind. Thanks :0
The animation is up on youtube, that version might be less lag intensive.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kT2cAy GgO_o
Woot
Bloody well done Marsume, you are getting so much better. I can not wait until you realease the actual video. Please, whatever you do just keep on creating episodes and go mad with your animation.
10/10 animation
10/10 sound
10/10 voice
10/10 music
10/10 theme
10/10 storyline
10/10 awesome
Marsume responds:
:O Thanks man!
not bad
It is quite cool and dark. I see potential in what you can do. If you are serious, you should get into human anatomy and the principles of animation.