LOL ok i must say this was probably one of the more funnier shorts then the 4 you have out, now you could have done alot more with this one though, like with the ending you could have the red guys, have done something to get more in a more funny and amusing way, maybe they chase him down for a bit and stomp on him, might make for a more funny and entertaining flash but what you have here was pretty funny, but as i have said in the other shorts, you should add more shorts to one flash, since they are very short, and some nice cute animation with the menu screen wouldnt hurt either, anyways good luck on any new stuff you may make, anyways nice job once again. So as improvments longer, more animation and a more funnier ending.
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As stated just above, needs to have a more amusing and funnier ending, some animation in the menu screen like you have some of the later episodes
Another amusing episode
Dialog is kindve a problem and spelling
is pretty funny though the way you set it up , be cool if you could actually do a voice over though so it isnt just text.