Man...
...this wasn't bad but wasn't good at all, I rated 2 (4 stars) because I know that you can do better.
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This is a test of what I can do,........... so if u see this and have anything to say please don't hold back on any comment you may have.
It's some fine animating but...
It's too incomplete. Anyone can tell there's more, so it's best this is finished before being published. You've got great animation skills, just put more effort into it. I'm sure you can make some top notch flash movies.
Mmmmm..
You seem to be a good artist my friend. I like your work, thou it could be a bit longer. I suggest before uploading, have friends and relatives see it first, then you can upload the real deal here. Keep it up mate and keep on improving, hoping to see a full scale project from you soon.
Okay
Pretty good with some minor flaws, if the sun is shining, and there is no clouds blocking it then it should be bright. Then the brightness goes away when the clouds cover it.
The eyes look weird when the black kid goes away, but it was good for short
Add more to it............ Sir?
Hey its looks okay the animation is great but it needs to be longer, the test is good add more to it.