Excelent

Give 'em the finger indeed!

Not Bad

Try working a bit more on the art and make the story longer. this will make it much better

Haha :)

This was great! It was really funny and the "directory" was a nice touch. I especially liked the "give them the finger" option. Great game! For Mister Fairytale 2, which I would love to see, maybe you could add even more choices and easier to read text? You should also pick an attractive menu/selection system that is relative to the cartoony, silly style of the game. Great job!