ummmmmm
You dont say like the concept. Keep up the good work. well since that your first flash cartoon. that really good then. keep them coming.
Author Comments
A little short about a man's relation to his best friend. I made this for my 2D animation class in which we had to create a short and funny cartoon with Flash using various cartoon and flash techniques.
I know I'm not that good of an animator (motion tween galore!), and it's not like I'll be doing this for a living, but I thought it could be a good idea to share it here. I guess the votes will tell. :p
Anyway, have fun watching!
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I really think you need to work more on your flash submissions. The sound wasn't exactly bad, but it was very unoriginal. The art was so bad I had trouble telling if it was the fox (I guess it's a fox? I can't really tell) or the dog that came back to him at first. The story was just not funny to me, either. The only redeeming quality I can think of for this flash is that it means you have plenty of potential still. I may have harshly criticized this flash, but I really do hope to see more from you because I know you can do better.
work more next time
it's have funny but not that funny and the animation sucks so you have to work more on that
haha lol
the guy needs braces and a haircut!
Meh its ok i guess
Sound : 5/10
Story : 5/10
Animation : 4/10
Final Verdict : 4,6 = 5