I knew there would be a time paradox from the start :P
To be perfectly honest, I have a mild fetish for this sort of thing.
I only see two real flaws: the blatantly wrong grammar in the full title, and the confusing fact that the black hole doesn't appear at the same location that the snake vanished, which skews the cause and effect.
Sorry for my bad english :(
I changed the title, should be ok now. Thanks for the review
now i get it :D
i always wonderd thanks for explaining :D
is was ok...
i seen worst stuff than this so i cant complan about it.