LAGS
its lags a lot
is one of my first flash animation, I hope you like it,
i accept criticism and Suggestion, thanks for watching
XD
LAGS
its lags a lot
cool!
Pretty fun for one of your first! I like the concept, and the art is crude but I think it fits -- I dig it! Like the others, I'd suggest something to the effect of letting the animation be a once-through rather than s loop so there's not 20 layers of music going on, but I think everyone makes that mistake starting out. I sure did! Keep at it... you'll do fine.
love the idea
now im gonna be honest with you. the animation sucked!
but i loved the idea the music went well too
keep it up
Good animation
However,
Stop the audio at the end of the animation or it causes it to start again as it's looped, so there's too much to listen to in the background and it is just generally annoying then.
However it's a good animation, Well drawn with a well thought out idea in it.
Glitch
So I thought your flash was overall good.
This comment is more regarding a slight glitch I encountered.
I think since your flash runs on a loop, when it restarts itself the music of the previous keeps going and the sounds all get layered. Im not sure how to fix it but you got a bug. hurray!