noticeable flaws

You need to do something about that music, like stream it or something. Put a stop(); on your last frame in the actionscript panel so I don't have to keep watching it; A replay button in case I do (but I don't). Also I don't mean to pick on you for this, but the story was kind of weak, I mean mario and luigi live in a world where there are only a few other humans, and mario is alreay fucking the one woman. Toad is pretty much getting raped in every castle by the koopa kids. So that pretty much just leaves a bunch of animals for luigi to plow. I mean this story is clearly about beastiality, not homosexuality. You could even have at least depicted them in the act to the song what what in the butt, and you've got an instant NewGrounds hit...maybe...

>:(

im insulted by this...

you just called weegee gay >:(
its not funny,
music overlaps...
luigi walking sprites change colors...

boring

short. not funny. plays the song over the others each reset. so i have about 3 different song going on now sux

bad

First off, it's not funny. It feels like you wrote a script and then mixed mario and luigi's lines around. It's as though they're having the same conversation but they're at different spots in it. And lastly, the video resets at the end but the music loop doesn't. so now the song is playing over itself several times. I'm sure if i left this on for a few minutes my computer would crash.

yeah...

You might wanna consider making something with some substance or at least good humor.
And I will be completely honest- the video quality sucked. Might wanna consider fixing that, too.