That sounds like Richard Nixon!
And the parrot sounds like William Howard Taft when he sees a sandwich!
May be better...
The movement from your charas was ok, but you can do better with the scene lighting, the character performance and the story (it ended early just when it could develop / continue to something interesting).
Keep practicing homeless.
It's probably just all the vicodin I'm on. Just got my wisdom teeth pulled and this happened!
Thanks for the tip though :)