A Good start
Since it's your first try, I'll give it 4.
I suggest you explore more ideas in the future. Good luck!
If this flash gets blammed, you'll need to make it 1 bit better.
Hmm might try youtube?
Why try it here? srsly.. use youtube and use more than one pic. an intro typical is also pretty polished with adobe aftereffects, shoulden't really have passed trough since this would only mean tht the video will be buried:P
try to do more than only a pic with text coming up. use Sony Vegas/Adobe Aftereffects for an intro.