im sorry but
you could do some idea bouncing off of your freinds to get a better idea. the animation had a lot to be desired. the joke in itself is not that funny, you gotta make it flow more.
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I got the idea for this from an Opie and Anthony segment which Jim Norton reads the funny pages and pitches his idea for a Lockhorns strip.
You can find the segment in this link:
http://www.youtube.com/wa tch?v=9xFhXYOTY8w
You know what? Just blam this shit already.