tis cool
but mt eden doesnt suit it
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My platformer game demo this is only a demo
I am working on the full game :)
Please give me some constructive criticism as this is my first flash Game
Hope you enjoy :D
It's still in Beta.
It's good you said this is a demo, because it's not ready. I think you need a lot of work before this is ready for Newgrounds or just the internet in general. The controls are in need of work, music and it's controls are in need of work. I will give you props for having a loading bar.
Well...
This has potential to be great and I have also seen the tutorial on youtube where you got this from and I have benefitted from it as well but, maybe you should make some original character designs and backgrounds, Don't just follow the tutorial word for word.
not half bad
some suggestens are...
1. make it so you are not gonna be damaged a few seconds after you get hit.
2. make enemys, not just natural hazards.
3. make it so you have to jump from one platform to another.
4. the ice should make you slide.
5. make items which are the value of multiple coins
Ehh.
The controls need to be fixed, other than that good luck with your game.