Very unique
Well this was artistic and unique in its own way and you have impressed me with the unique character style and drawings so awsome job there And So while I may not have had much to say if you keep making stuff like this and keep improving on stuff I will ofcourse be right there to enjoy it aswell, so nice effort you have here. There was a few instances where you could make things better but we will discuss improvments later, but anyways great stuff sofar, I will end it here soon and possibly add some helpful tips. but overall this was interesting.
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Its amazing and needs no major changes but please do make more
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