well

it seems pretty good, find a way to make the text longer and fix the spelling mistakes and you got a good series on your hand man

like it, but...

it has to have some work done on it. it doesnt flow, mostly because there is no back story. i know benz and jared (or whatever his name is) must have met befor, but you learn this halfway threw.
or i just got the isusion that they do, even if they dont.
so... try to let it flow more.

I actually enjoyed it

it was good but it seems that some scenes are like appearing in the wrong time, what I did enjoy was your design of characters nice job

great animation, but....

try to let the story flow out.
it felt like you tried too hard to get most of the points across.
and yes, the one plot hole is his urge to sleep after becoming "all-powerful."

Almost

The thing that bothered me is that a lot of the dialogue felt unnatural and forced, and one minor thing the bothered me is after he gets energized by the crystals, "feeling more energy and power than ever before" <(or something to that nature), why would he go to sleep? =P

But the animation seemed good for what it is and it could have potential for future episodes.