very well done the truth, and that the music was somewhat strange!!!
Author Comments
They say the television might be broken. Lightbulbs for everyone! Clickie clickie
Really nice dude
Jesus Christ
This is creepy as shit dood...It reminds me of the ring...scary as fuck dood, make more of these,
Good start
Well, it was a really good, promising start to the piece, with the way that the frame by frame starts - what music did you choose to use?
When you get to the (what I presume was the) end, where the tree sits there with the lightbulb on and three frames seem to repeat over and over again. With this in place, you've got a very bad middle, or just a holding pattern, not really ending the piece, which is a shame, because your viewers deserve better.
Try sending the piece to some sort of completion and adding a few things that make it look better - more frames, to make the animation smoother and as it gets into position, you'll see how much more rewarding it can be.
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Soulshredder666 responds:
This is my first animation.True,the middle is a bit underdeveloped and sort of cuts short/abruptly,however this was due to a deadline,as the animation was for a school project. Also,the movie doesn't end at the lightbulb loop,the lightbulb is clickable,but I wanted it to be sort of an easter egg that just goes into an ending screen.Thanks a lot for the input,it means a lot for an inexperienced animator.Oh,the soundtrack is off of Silent Hill Homecoming,it's called Sepulcher or something like that :D
Ok, that was good, let's try it again, but better.
Well, the 'play' button caught my attention, and it did look interesting, but then it didn't really go anywhere, so in the end, it's just a waste of time.
You've got a style, now let's see some substance.