Well this one seemed alright but I felt that the gears cut scene was used a bit too much. Where did it come from anyways? Then him already knowing that he got it wrong before seeing the door is a little weird. Could have included a wrong sound click and a correct sound click to show that he did it right.

The animation hasn't changed much here as usual. The voice acting was nice to hear as usual. Hilarious how Drake has heard of Brutus yet had no idea that was Brutus at the end. Wonder how the boss battle for #11 will be going for him too.

Overall, seemed to be alright, the 3D gear scene... would be nice if you said where it came from.

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You're making this hard for me. Really, with the fact that you're going a little beyond poetic licence, by stating that Drake knows what gears engaging sounds like. You've used too much of the "cheat" cut scenes and stuff that you've not made, so I can't give you credit for that. Re-using the scenes and just flipping them isn't all that much work, either, so it's kind of a lazy piece, especially when you throw in my pet hate of part voice acted lines and part text, with no vocals.

Most of this episode is chaff, where we get nothing to really advance the plot and it's just filler material. Given the time spent on this episode and the last, you could combine them together and not lose anything of importance, while still having a script of note, to really get the piece moving.

The ideas are essentially good, but I would suggest that you sit down and look at the scripts, before moving to the storyboard part of the process. This would allow you to catch issues and deal with them, before the piece starts to take off and you publish with issues such as you've shown here.

I'm not saying that you should give up, but learn from these mistakes and give yourself a chance to win some awards.

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Very boring

I thought that this peace was just boreing. I mean nothing caught me and made me want to see more, but i will give it too you good story line, just too dull. In part to try to spice it up a little do something that is not expected maybe a really good fighting scene with them.