Beeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep

It's the simple things in life you treasure.

hehe :)

The end made me laugh :Þ

Pretty good flash but you can probly tell it needs a little more work (&time)

Overall 4/5

~Falconjab

That was Okay

It actually made me laugh. But I agree with thompsonmusdie. You do need a little bit more sound effects. Also, work on the animation just a little bit more. But anyways this was pretty good. 8/10

Could be worse.

At the very least you have decent animation, but it could be better. Also you need music, or more sound effects.

meh...

Its a cool story but the artwork is baad.
Work on Artwork!